SHOW NOT TELL

 

1.   Bill was excited. (He's going on his first fishing

    trip.  Bill is the main character.)

my way of I would show know tell

Jumping out of his bed filling excited at the same time bill got his stuff organise for his first fishing trip. jumping out of his bed with goose bumps, butterflies in his stomach and with excitement.

2.   Emily was angry.  (Her older sister told her she

    couldn't come shopping with her.  The main character

    is Laura, the older sister.)

my way of I would show know tell

NO stay you're not coming with me to shopping you can stay Feeling sad and mentally at the same time. clenching her fist with a red face wanting to slap her sister.

3.   Larry was jealous.  (His best friend just won $100.000

    in a lottery. Larry is the main character.)

    

my way of I would show know tell

“Nanananana i just 100.00” said Calvin. I will get you back 1 day I will get you back said Larry filling jealous at the same time.

4.   Susan was nervous.  (She's afraid she won't pass the

    spelling test.  Susan is the main character.)

my way of I would show know tell

“O no I won't pass my test I think my teacher may tell me off if I don’t pass it/’ said Susan.        

5.   Don was a loyal friend.  (Steven, his friend, has just

    struck out playing baseball.  Steven is the main

    character.)

my way of I would show know tell

oh no I miss now I am out now” said Steven nice try Steven you're the best said don

6.   Sally was smart.  (She is tutoring a friend who is

    having a hard time understanding a maths story

    problem.  The main character is Fred.)

my way of I would show know tell

no said Fred how can I get this question. can you help me sally please said Fred. yes I could help you what do you need help on said Halley. on this question said Fred.

MY MATH

AURI Hexagons - Consolidation Of Fractions W9

Miss Clark has a cake that she has to share with seven other people. What fraction of the cake does Miss Clark get to eat?

1 hole of 7

What is ⅖ of 20? = 20

5 ÷ 20 = 10

10 x 2 = 20  

James has 32 lollies in a bag, he eats ½ of his lollies. How many lollies does James eat?

1/2 of 32 = 16

32 ÷ 2 = 16

16 x 1 = 16

Michael knows that walking to school takes one hour. Walking to his nanas house only takes ¼ of that time. How long does it take to walk to nanas?

1/4 of 60 = 15

this is how i got my answer i did 15 + 15 + 15 + 15 = 60 so the answer would be 15

It took me six hours to walk up Mount Tapawai, however only 1/3 of that time to walk back down, how many hours could  have walked down in?

this is how i got my answer i did 120 + 120 + 120 = 60 so the answer would be 120

1//3 of 360 would be 120

What is ¼ of 100?

25 x 4 = 100

this is how i got the answer i just did 25 + 25 + 25 + 25 = 100 that how i got my answer

What is ¾ of 100?

so you draw 4 box and then you put 25 in each boxes and then colour in 3 then you will get 75

Mum gave me $100 for xmas I spent $¼ of it buying a top for myself. How much was my top?

so you draw 4 boxes and then you put 25 in each and then you colour in 1 of the box and you would get your answer the answer would 25

James got paid $90 a day from work. He spent ½ on his groceries, how much did he spent on his groceries?

his groceries would be 45 $. he would get 45 left of his money.

What is 5/9 of 45?

so you draw 9 boxes and then you put 9 in each then you colour in 5 and then you would most 45 properly get 45

What is ⅗ of 200?

so you draw 5 boxes and then you put 50  in each boxes and then you colour in 3 then you answer will be 150

What is 9/12 of 144?

so you draw 12 boxes and then you put 12 in each boxes then you colour in 9 then that will = 108

MATHS WK 9 AURi

ALL BLACK CAPTION

THE NEW ZEALAND CAPTAIN RICHIE MACAW. RICHIE MACAW WENT TO A SCHOOL CALLED LINCOLN UNIVERSITY AND HE WAS RAISED IN A PLACE CALLED OAMARU .

RICHIE WAS BORN ON THE  DECEMBER 31. HE WAS A YOUNG KID WHEN HE PLAYED RUGBY.   HE IS THE BEST NUMBER 7 IN THE WORLD AND HE IS  THE BEST RUGBY PLAYER IN THE WORLD, THAT WHAT I THINK.

RICHIE MACAW IS A FAMOUS RUGBY PLAYER FOR BEEN  BECAUSE HE IS THE ALL BLACK CAPTION. AND HE PLAYED RUGBY WHEN HE WAS A KID. RICHIE PLAYS WITH DAN CARTER, MA’A NONU, KIERAN READ THEY ARE THE MAIN PLAYERS FOR THE ALL BLACK TEAM. RICHIE ALSO PLAYS FOR THE CRUSADERS.

RICHIE MACAW IS A ROLE MODEL BECAUSE HE PUT HIS TEAM BEFORE HIM, HE IS A HUMBLE MAN, HE DOES NOT GET ANGRY WHEN HIS TEAM LOSES A GAME, HE KEEPS HIS HEAD UP WHEN HIS TEAM LOSES A GAME. ON MAY 2006, AGED 25 HAVING PLAYED 36 TEST MATCHES AS AN ALL BLACK, RICHIE MACAW
WAS NAMED CAPTAIN FOR THE ALL BLACK.  

FACT FINDER

THIS IS WHAT I DONE AFTER MORNING-TEA.  

MY NEWS REPORT

OH NO the Malaysia plane has been vanish for nearly 3 weeks. The  plane had 239 people on board. Well I think that the two plalet is the suspect because I think they off the signal so the airport people can't track them that what I think. The plan was vanish a has never been found. If I was one of the people on board I would be scared and I will think that we are going to die.              

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I can not believe it the Malaysia plane has vanish and it gone. Now the airliners are trying to track down the plane they are trying there best to try and track down the plane so they could save the 239 people on board. Police a even trying to track down the plane they are trying there best to look for the vanish plane.   

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The 239 peoples family are properly crying for there family. If my family is in the plane I would cry all day for them. The vanish plane had 2 little baby on board that is just an sad think the two little babies are on board. planes and ship are hunting for the vanish plane they are trying to find the plane so the 239 people are safe.

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NOW THE AIRLINERS A TRYING TO INVESTIGATE HOW DID THE PASSENGERS GET IN WITH TWO FAKE PASSPORT. I THINK THIS IS WRONG. I THINK THE AIRLINERS SHOULD OF LOOKED PROPERLY AT THE TWO PASSENGERS FACES. I WOULD LIKE TO HELP BUT I AM JUST A LITTLE KID. I WOULD WANT TO HELP FIND THE 239 PEOPLE ON BOARD.

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