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Monday 18 March 2013

Writing Sample

One day there was a family. The mum and dads names were Mary and Henry. They had two kids whose names were Lizzie and Jake. Lizzie and Jake went to a school called Pt England school. They enjoyed going to school but today it was holiday. 

The family was having fun inside. but when Lizzie and Jake went outside to play until they felt something sarang happen they could see a few people disappearing. “O NO’’ said Jake we need to tell mum and that there are people disappearing.“ no they're not said dad’’ “there's is said Jake.


So there mum and dad run outside to cheek but they could see everyone. mum and dad told Jake and Lizzie that there are no one missing.”yes there is the two little one’s said’’ so mum and dad went back to the sitting room to watch TV. Jake and Lizzie stayed outside to see if they could steel see people disappearing.

Alex And The Rusty House (By Auri and Alex)

Alex and Auri rode their bikes home after training. They had decided to go the other way back home. Suddenly as they turned the corner they spotted an old spooky derelict house. Alex said,  ‘‘Yuk house. I’m going home now. ” But Auri told Alex to stay and not to go home. “Lets try and go inside,” said Auri.


When Auri and Alex walked up onto the steps one of the floorboards  had broken off. “Whew” said Alex as he quickly jumped over the hole. “That was lucky.”
They slowly opened the rusty old door and went into the spooky derelict house. Inside it was dark and dusty. All they could see were shadows and shapes. They saw a hole in the corner of the floor and inside was black. Next to the hole was a bucket of water. “Pooo,” Auri said “That bucket smells like old fish.


So Auri and Alex went to go up stairs to see if there is an chest. when they got up stairs
Alex was scared because rat was running past him. he run at the back of Auri. Then Auri saw a bedroom door. So they went to open the door Alex was scared.They went to look inside. inside was a chest sitting on the floor.
Then they got their bike and  went back home to tell their Mum and Dad that they sow a rusty old house and went in it .There Mum told them to go for a shower.