Writing Sample

One day there was a family. The mum and dads names were Mary and Henry. They had two kids whose names were Lizzie and Jake. Lizzie and Jake went to a school called Pt England school. They enjoyed going to school but today it was holiday. 

The family was having fun inside. but when Lizzie and Jake went outside to play until they felt something sarang happen they could see a few people disappearing. “O NO’’ said Jake we need to tell mum and that there are people disappearing.“ no they're not said dad’’ “there's is said Jake.


So there mum and dad run outside to cheek but they could see everyone. mum and dad told Jake and Lizzie that there are no one missing.”yes there is the two little one’s said’’ so mum and dad went back to the sitting room to watch TV. Jake and Lizzie stayed outside to see if they could steel see people disappearing.