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Friday 7 June 2013

My Week 5 Writing


Splash I step into a huge puddle, soaking my boots. Brmmmm  this huge car zoomed past me. spraying water, like a wave,  onto my face. The water beside the gutter looked like a river.  I had  soggy boots, a wet bag and a huge wet face.

2 comments:

Khi Khi Bya said...

Hi Auri.

I really like your story a lot .
I like the word said "Hug wet face"

Keep posting a lot.
( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

Anonymous said...

Go boy! proud of you auri go hard and go for gold! - Corey Sio

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