In the holidays me and my cousin went to Eden Park to perform a haka in front of 300 people. It felt great doing the haka in front of so many people. The people watching were taking photos of us. I was proud of myself, and the rest of the kids that performed.
After going back home me and my cousin went to his brothers house and we played Bang. We slept over at his house. The next day early in the morning we went for a run. I thought my holidays were great.
3 comments:
Well done Auri. It's great to see two paragraphs about two main ideas. It's good to see you writing a complete paragraph to.
Next time you write remember to say your sentences out aloud three times before you write them down.
hi auri
I really like your sentence about performing in front of 300 people that is amazing. did you do new zealands haka?
Wow!Sounds like fun.Well done on the spelling!
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