SHOW NOT TELL

 

1.   Bill was excited. (He's going on his first fishing

    trip.  Bill is the main character.)

my way of I would show know tell

Jumping out of his bed filling excited at the same time bill got his stuff organise for his first fishing trip. jumping out of his bed with goose bumps, butterflies in his stomach and with excitement.

2.   Emily was angry.  (Her older sister told her she

    couldn't come shopping with her.  The main character

    is Laura, the older sister.)

my way of I would show know tell

NO stay you're not coming with me to shopping you can stay Feeling sad and mentally at the same time. clenching her fist with a red face wanting to slap her sister.

3.   Larry was jealous.  (His best friend just won $100.000

    in a lottery. Larry is the main character.)

    

my way of I would show know tell

“Nanananana i just 100.00” said Calvin. I will get you back 1 day I will get you back said Larry filling jealous at the same time.

4.   Susan was nervous.  (She's afraid she won't pass the

    spelling test.  Susan is the main character.)

my way of I would show know tell

“O no I won't pass my test I think my teacher may tell me off if I don’t pass it/’ said Susan.        

5.   Don was a loyal friend.  (Steven, his friend, has just

    struck out playing baseball.  Steven is the main

    character.)

my way of I would show know tell

oh no I miss now I am out now” said Steven nice try Steven you're the best said don

6.   Sally was smart.  (She is tutoring a friend who is

    having a hard time understanding a maths story

    problem.  The main character is Fred.)

my way of I would show know tell

no said Fred how can I get this question. can you help me sally please said Fred. yes I could help you what do you need help on said Halley. on this question said Fred.